Previously on Dragonball [static noises]
Daily Writing Practice #29: 29 November 2023
Now we get to the meat of the thing. What would happen if Goku stayed dead after Namek.
First of all, there’s no Goku for Trunks to meet, and if Freeza died too, only Cold comes to seek revenge. And then there’s the Androids. How does that whole thing play out? Stay tuned and I’m sure we can find out together.
Of course, there are other changes that will play out with Goku being dead.1 But I’ll have to figure that out later.
l will add more to the King Cold fight, add Tien, Yumcha etc to the desert gathering, and the proper warning about the Androids.2
And next time on Dragonball something, the plot.
I spent an hour and fifty on this and came out with 1674 words
I also uploaded The Bar last night. I didnt write anything here because I ran out of time. But I dont like it. Its missing something I dont quite get just yet. Still, its something that fits into a larger story while containing a beginning, middle and end of its own. I think I wanted it to be some kind of noir-ish thing. Could be worth a revisit one day.
The Bar was originally written on the 19th of October 2016
Do I add Cell foreshadowing?